MegaMan Matrix VS The Eight Elites

[Vinchenz Rock]

So... I've decided to take a break from MMMRPG (although that break is long past over due >_>) and decided to put my other creative juices into play.

Some of you may remember MMMVS81337s, but most of you probably won't. It was originally a short story involving people from here battling against an organization known as the Eight Elites. The Eight Elites are eight users with abnormal power, and one day they decide to toy with MMM just because we're a small community that no one cares about. Well, oops, bad underestimation on their part, that small community just happens to save the world (in a way) because of their toying.

I've been really wanting to put this story on paper for a long time... I was thinking of making it a short story again (and restart the series) but this time... I put those creative juices onto a paper with a pencil. Yep, this is a comic. A fully drawn one for that matter. Although, I want your guys opinions first though, I have a feeling many of you won't like my art style (partially due to the realism and partially due to that horribleness) so if this doesn't work out, I'll go back to Microsoft Word.

Oh yeah, and this is going to be a dark story. Everyone here is used to the cheesy, humour filled comics... but this is going to be something actually serious, one with blood and death in it (on the internet no less).

Anyway, here are the first few pages (with explanations):
*Note, I'm very sorry for the very bad quality. I currently don't own a scanner and won't have one available until next week. If you can't read it, mention it, so I can type it out*

Page 1:

(Yes, 2007. Those lips are intentional. And also, I know "Is the..." is a grammar error (verb subject agreement to be exact, >_>)

Page 2:

(Again, intentional lips. Noticed those three don't have the same lips? Also, the three of them were meant to have different body shapes. Another, Welcome to... thing is intentional. This is the internet, billboards are just floating letters)

Page 3:

(Finally! The StarMan in a comic! Yes, originally I didn't have the StarMan but I'll be turning into him quite a few times in this story. Yes, I'm the main character for the first chapter of the book, the main character will change for each chapter. The picture will make more sense later on. And yes, the hand was intentionally twisted like that. Can you guess why?)

Page 4:

(Finally, page 4 XD. Anyway, here are actual MMM people. Their official "names" will be Sano, Wind, Jake, and Rock (and the occasional Hunter) for me. For some parts, Wind will be referred to as Preventer and I'll be referred to as Vinchenz. Also, those guys at the door are the "boys" Honcho mentioned).

So there you have it... like it or hate it? Stick to drawing or return to Microsoft Word? If I continue drawing I'll eventually have a scanner available to use, so don't worry about the bad quality. If I go to Microsoft Word... well, you're going to have to IMAGINE the things.

[preventerWIND]

Did you notice on the 3rd panel, it's spelled MegaMan Matix? Ahah!

Anyways, it's a great comic, I'd love to see more *just as long as I'm in it*

[ASR]

It's spelled "MegaMan Matix" on the second page, too, at the bottom.

Hehe, smooth.

Other than that, I like it, I just don't know what to expect.

[Vinchenz Rock]

GOD DAMN IT!

I CAN'T BELIEVE I DID THAT! #####!

>_<

I'll just change that before I rescan it with an actual scanner... Ugh... thanks for picking that up. I don't know how on Eath I missed the letter "R".

[ASR]

TWICE.

[Vinchenz Rock]

Three times you mean.

[ASR]

No, just twice. You spelled it right once.

[Vinchenz Rock]

I'll let you ponder that one.

Just don't stare at the comics too long.

[ASR]

I give up.

[Vinchenz Rock]

I'll just change that before I rescan it with an actual scanner... Ugh... thanks for picking that up. I don't know how on Eath I missed the letter "R".

That wasn't intentional. I caught that AFTER I posted it.

[ASR]

I'm willing to bet it was intentional.

I mean, we can't blame your keyboard.

[Vinchenz Rock]

It seriously wasn't. XD

I missed that key, like, I think I tried to press "R" but since "T" is right beside it, I barely touched the key and went for "T".

Posted on: 31 January 2008, 18:45:45

Update! Page 4! I didn't forget about this, silly. XD

I also re-uploaded the first three with premium quality. Except, page 3 doesn't look quality. I'm going to have to re-upload that one. >_>

Also, updates will be... not very often. Two a week, hopefully. This comic will be going slooow... <_<

Also, older pages will be url'd in the future. I just wanted everyone to see the re-uploaded pages.

[ASR]

Will I make any appearances?
Hehe, then again, I've yet to include you in MMMTV.

Anyway, definitely stick to drawing. The more you do it, the better you'll become, and soon enough it won't even be a question.

[Vinchenz Rock]

Will I make any appearances?

NO.

Of course you will, though, the first chapter will be have the least members to appear due to it being during the summer and most people are on vacation (will be noted later on).

And yeah, I want to stick with drawing. Right now it may look like crap, and takes an hour to do a page, but that'll change eventually.

[Mikero]

I don't know, I think I like the original better.

[ASR]

I haven't read the original, so this is all new to me, and I prefer pictures over words, so long as it's legible.

[Vinchenz Rock]

In the original, after four updates, one of the Matricians already beat Grenade (which is the first battle of the three, btw).

In the comic, afther four updates, we barely get to the first fight. <_<

I'd love to upload the stories, but I lost them a long time ago...

I'm thinking of staying with the comic but I don't want this series to last for four years... Whatever, I'll try to upload comics as much as I can.

[preventerWIND]

woah I only noticed now that you put up another comic! #####ing right man! Sano has been downgraded froma cowboy jackass to a bowler wearing jackass.

[Captain Sanoguchi]

Yeah, and why am I talking about Gurren Lagann? That might be the only anime I talk about here, but more often I talk about Haruhi or Embalming.

[Vinchenz Rock]

I don't get the bowler bit.

And I'm sorry if I don't stalk you, Sano. The most information I get from the users is their posts from here.

[Captain Sanoguchi]

...Maybe if you talked to me more often...

[SacredFireman]

So they're gonna try taking over, ha!

I expect at least one scene with Rez and his tomato stick beating them up.

[Vinchenz Rock]

Don't worry, Sano, you're not the only one. I barely talk to anyone here outside the 'Matrix.

[Mikero]

I'd love to upload the stories, but I lost them a long time ago...

Of the few MMM creative story things I've saved, I have chapters 1-12 of this.

...Maybe if you talked to me more often...

NO GET BACK IN THE CUPBOARD!

[preventerWIND]

V, something just occurred to me about your character. Is everybody here thinking what I'm thinking?..

MAKEOVER!![/clone high]

[Mikero]

Suicide!

[ASR]

I, ER, UH, WOULD LIKE, A PAWTY PLATTAH

[preventerWIND]

Throw some more er's and uh's in there, whats your hurry?

[Mikero]

[/clonehigh] Damn you! [/clonehigh]!!!

[Vinchenz Rock]

Yeah my character was always lame looking. Thats why I have The StarMan (which is TOTALLY not a Master Chief rip off!)

Of the few MMM creative story things I've saved, I have chapters 1-12 of this.

SRSLY!??!1!?!?!?1111/!1

Mind raring/zipping them and sending it to me somehow? >_>;

[Mikero]

I'll try it this weekend, I'm a bit busy this moment though.

[Vinchenz Rock]

For the record, this isn't dead, yet. I think I'll go back to writing but with a bit of a twist. For now, this thread will be a place holder and art thread for me.

[Cherry]

Am I still in it?  If so, can I have a new alter-ego design, since it seems to have changed on me once more...?

[Vinchenz Rock]

You didn't exist until after I wrote the fan fiction. >_>

You must be thinking of my other project, MMMRPG which, yes, you're still in.

[Cherry]

...Strange, then whose MMM fic was I in?  Could have sworn it was this one.  Oh, well.  Sorry to bother you, then... X_X

[Lunchebox]

Mine, maybe? The one where I killed off everyone?

[Majikn]

Cherry, you were in MMMRPG. And my MMX7-8 rewrite. Unfortunately I don't think I'm very good at using characters that are already developed by someone else in my stories, and I ended up having more characters than I really wanted. Not to mention the story itself was #####ed up to the max anyway.

Something about Spider becoming the harbinger of the Neo-Nightmare and explaining how the hell Axl was created, all the while giving X sabre skills and making him behave oddly around Reploids with long brown hair (Cherry) and explaining it with the idea of Zero (who stayed dead) being a subconscious part of X due to the power of the physics-defying Nightmare that were created with evil space energy (the supposed supernatural element) mixed with Zero data and the Sigma virus and all that lovely stuff that the space colony got mixed in with before it fell to the Earth in pieces.

They were all supposed to end up entering this Nightmare cyberworld via Axl (who was supposedly created by Gate, lolol GET IT?) to destroy the link between it and their world without killing Axl, with Mikero as some mercenary dude going in to save his friend Jake (a mushroom mechaniloid that fought with a giant iron-packing ride armor of death that got crunched to pieces) who is trapped in that dimension with Seran trying to survive the hordes of Nightmare zombiefreaks.

[Vinchenz Rock]

Alright, sorry guys, no twist. But here's chapter one, in both Microsoft Word format and .txt format for those without Word.

Posted on: 12 February 2008, 20:00:49

At least one person read this. >_>

I've re-uploaded the files to make them neater. I also have chapters two and three done but I'm not going to upload them yet.

Edit: Huh, MMM doesn't like .rtf files.
I changed the .txt to .rtf to make it look neater. >_>
Guess I'll just upload the .doc files and won't convert them anymore unless someone does complain about not being able to open it.

Also, to those of you who read the original, this will be much different because A) I don't remember how the original was written like at all and 2) I forgot how the original outline was (I think Grenade was the first guy to attack MMM but I'm not sure. If he was, well, too late now).

[Mikero]

This weekend I sent the originals to the e-mail you have set up on your profile. I think it was Sunday.

[Vinchenz Rock]

*Sigh* only one download yet again...

I'm not going to bother with this if no one's interested.

[Mikero]

I downloaded both but I haven't had time to read them yet.

[ASR]

Nothing against you, Vinch, I'm just not a fan of fanfiction of any sort.

[Vinchenz Rock]

I downloaded both but I haven't had time to read them yet.

Yeah, I thought it was you.

Nothing against you, Vinch, I'm just not a fan of fanfiction of any sort.

That's fine but it still doesn't mean much.

Posted on: 14 February 2008, 23:15:46

Here's chapter 3, btw. Concludes the battle so you won't have to be worried.

If nobody is interested after this then I'm just going to lock the topic.

[yuri]

How do all you guys make these?

[NovaMan XP]

I downloaded it, but I gotz a question. Is this the same one as the one you had when MMM was last up?

[Vinchenz Rock]

Nope, remade.

Completely different too, but that wasn't on purpose. I litterally forgot everthing about the old one, that's why I forgot Rocket and replaced him with Shotgun.

[NovaMan XP]

Ah, so that gives me more reason to read it then.

[Vinchenz Rock]

It's also a lot more mature and not full of EVERYTHING errors.

[NovaMan XP]

Cool, but.. will I make an appearance again like the last one? I remember being involved somewhat.

[Vinchenz Rock]

Yes, but the "sagas" will have different main characters. You aren't in with Grand Honcho (unlike last time).

Also, you were pretty big in the first one.