Ditz The Fox! 1.

[Jaker]

A story of a Fox Named Ditz

Posted on: 23 August 2008, 20:25:12

If you want to have the 2nd one Send me an Email telling me. My Email is (jacob.shangle@hotmail.com)

[Someguy]

So all I gotta do to see the second one is Email you your Email? What a deal!

[Mikero]

Why even make a thread?

[Captain Sanoguchi]

For attention.

[Lunchebox]

Like when Sano cuts himself!

[Jaker]

Howd did you guys like it?

[Lunchebox]

Like what?

[Captain Sanoguchi]

The meat?

[Mikero]

Where's the beef?

[Fatso]

Where's the cream filling?

[Lunchebox]

I #####ing love pastrami.

[Captain Sanoguchi]

I'm partial to the musical stylings of Shwayze.

[Mikero]

His Buzzin' is an alright song, the show of the same name is somewhat interesting.

[Jaker]

Did you guys even read the story? Did you Like The Story??

[ChaosVortex]

What story? You removed it from this topic and you're not putting much effort in showing it to us. You can take the time to upload it here rather than hassle us for it if you want critique so badly.

I don't read fan-fiction, but even so, if you want to show us your creative work so bad, then show it at people's convenience.

[Lunchebox]

Did you guys even read the story? Did you Like The Story??

The hell are you talking about? In all of your posts, I have seen NO story.

And if this is the way you write, then I'm just going to go ahead and say it was bad.

[Jaker]

If you guys want me to put it back on can you guys not copy it and sell it?? Plz and thanks and maybe i might just post it again. Maybe

[ASR]

...hahahaaaaa.

Oh god, I didn't really need that laugh before bed, since I just watched a handful of Arrested Development episodes, but it sure is welcome.

[Winged Warrior]

Aw ##### Jaker,

Seeing as you didn't copy write it, I already published it.


SORRY.

[Fatso]

He probably didn't copywrite it, but any "literary work" like this is protected by copyright laws nonetheless.

Of course, since it seems not to exist there should be no issues. Carry on.

[Winged Warrior]

In all seriousness, It's his creative property. And he can take legal action against ANYONE who publishes it as their work, all he has to do is note it as his work...

I just like the fact that this thread lives, and he's trying to get us to beg him to post it. As far as Ive seen, very few people respect written stories, and those who do, write their own.

All Ive seen of this "story" is what is in that first post, and then he begs us for attention by getting us to e-mail something to the factor of "I love it, i won't steel if U send me second!"



Seriously Jaker, Earn yourself some respect and have the nerve to post what you have, and while we are at it, when someone tells you you need to work on something, do it... With the exception of Sano.

[Majikn]

I don't have anything to add except that the word is "copyright". Copy writing is most likely the act of doing what a copyright would likely not allow.

[ASR]

He used to have it as a file in his first post, but I didn't click it. And then the next time I checked, he must've removed it because you guys were all talking about how there isn't even anything there.

[ChaosVortex]

I saw it too, but he removed it.

And seriously? You're afraid someone will be low enough to copy fan-fiction and sell it?

That's why you removed it?

...

Why even make a thread?

[Mikero]

You can't even sell fanfiction in the first place since IT contains copyrighted characters already.

Anyway I resent the notion that people here don't "respect written stories". That's not true. Not bothering to download a file for whatever reason just means someone's not advertising it right, it's not really a lack of respect. Everyone pretty much respects what Cherry writes, whether or not they read it.

Bleh.

[ChaosVortex]

You can't even sell fanfiction in the first place since IT contains copyrighted characters already.

Even if you could find a way to do it... why would you?

Fan-works are free to the general public. If someone took something that's generally free and made a profit off of it...

I don't know the exact word I'm looking for so help me out here, but... that's really pathetic.

[AlexThePenguin]

If selling fan-fiction is illegal, then how do you get things like spin-off book series that have nothing to do with the original movie/whatever other than character names? (Especially those having no involvement of the original author/producer/whatever)

[Mikero]

They're always authorised by the creator or the company that owns the rights to the product beforehand.

[AlexThePenguin]

It's still selling fan-fiction.

[ASR]

No, it's promoting the bigger product and expanding the fanbase to idiots who will actually buy that sort of stuff just because it has the franchise label slapped onto it.

[AlexThePenguin]

It's still written by fans, thus making it fan-fiction, albeit franchised fan-fiction.

[ChaosVortex]

Although in this case, it is not.

If this "story", wherever it may be was stolen and sold, that's undeniably sad.

My point is: If you're afraid your creative works are going to be stolen, Jaker, then you should have attempted to sell this "story" in the first place or not have posted at all. Only members can view uploaded works and I doubt someone here would want to sell it for profit. You removing it only makes it difficult for people that actually care to read it and give you critique, praise, or whatever they want to say.

In short... you're not helping yourself.

[Mikero]

It's still selling fan-fiction.

No, it's promoting the bigger product and expanding the fanbase to idiots who will actually buy that sort of stuff just because it has the franchise label slapped onto it.

It's still written by fans, thus making it fan-fiction, albeit franchised fan-fiction.

It doesn't matter. All I said was that you can't sell something that contains copyrighted characters you don't own unless you're authorised to. Thus making it impossible for anyone on MMM to steal and sell Ditz The Fox. That's it, that's all.

[Panda]

I laughed, I cried, I danced, I rolled. I went through all the usual emotions reading this story.

Five out of Five. Well done.

[Lunchebox]

If you guys want me to put it back on can you guys not copy it and sell it?? Plz and thanks and maybe i might just post it again. Maybe

I assure you, I would never claim any of your work as my own.

[Jaker]

ok Now tell me how you like it   

If u like it and want the 2nd one just email me. Email (jacob.shangle@hotmail.com)

[preventerWIND]

That was terrible. It was like a bad fanfiction crossed with a bad sprite comic. Try some originality buddy, you got a fox, an echidna, and a hedgehog, and the main protagonist is a doctor? Come on.

Then we have a bunch of math equations in the middle of the story, what the hells that #####? Good Gravy, I'm keeping this story and reading it whenever I'm depressed. Its so ridiculous its funny.

congaturlations
you get a F-
you are bad end

[ASR]

This was...


...#####ing genius.

There's no way this can't be genius satire.

[Someguy]

This makes me wanna play on the Ditz Playstation 3, it also makes me wanna kill my self

[ChaosVortex]

Okay.

Not to bash or anything, as much as I can right now (and I really REALLY can right now).

But is this the same story you removed?

I just skimmed it.

You removed it because you were afraid someone would steal and sell the story?

This Sonic ripoff?

wat

[Someguy]

He didn't want any one to sell it? Oops I already printed out my own cover, made me the author and put it up for auction on Ebay

[preventerWIND]

Oh #####, thats right. Who the hell would make this into an actual hard copy story? And then have the balls to sell it?

WOW

[Snare]

Can I be in the story??? I think there should be a part where they make a band and then they fight with lnking part and blink183

rockstar 4 life ||D || ||V|| ||D

[von Teelio]

Have you read an actual fiction before?

[Mikero]

He's more afraid of someone stealing this than I am of someone stealing Mittens and Crumplehorn, and MnC is actually well written.

I really stopped even trying to give this it's first real critique went I read the word "Level". I only finished the first "chapter."

This can't be serious. And I'm fitting to put it on YTMND as one of those "A Dramatic Reading" things.

[von Teelio]

Hey, at least he tried. (If you consider that trying)

[Captain Sanoguchi]

It's the bastard child of My Immortal and Twilight!

[Mikero]

Hey, at least he tried. (If you consider that trying)

No he didn't. I'm almost completely certain this is some joke.

I mean, I know the story is a joke, but I mean that I think he's just doing the literary equivalent of trolling.

[ASR]

Mike, the sad thing is, no "literary troll" would write THAT much.

It's just... it's just a kid who really likes Sonic and wanted to create his own world, and used writing as his unfortunate outlet.

[von Teelio]

Haven't we all been there at least once?